In Middle of Nowhere and holding nothing
Stands a man with blankness in Memory
He wonders about the hourglass and its sand
The heart of the past and the meaning of present
The scar has a coarse reality to it
Reality has no explanation of irony
Did he ever dream of a hopeful future
Imagining that the past would be redeemed
He looks at the crystal blue stretch
Touches the cold indifference of comfort
The sting of that first touch and a reassurance
Some feelings are not in your own sense
The nothingness parts and dream subsides
A crowd of thoughts and a face in sight
Face Says “Goals ahead and a past less mind
What takes you through is your heart’s might.”
“Where am I Oh face of wisdom
Dreams are made of man’s life
A dream to an incident, an idol to a mortal
That’s how the future does the past drive”
“Moment is what you live,
Moment is what you die
Moment is what you win
Life is what you Try ”
5 comments:
Aakhri ki 4 laina mast hai...
This is another example which shows your ability to perceive thoughts and feelings behind the scenes; I believe you wrote this poem for ‘Eternal Sunshine of spotless mind’. I can relate Joel’s feelings of the Blankness of mind and the heart full of feelings in this poem. You can really understand the meaning and objective of one’s creation. The concluding lines are really amazing; those make a great thought about life.
@Kapil-->Thanks.
It has been a while since I have seen Eternal Sunshine of Spotless Mind. Hence, it did not occur to me when i was writing this. But yes, the setting is similar. I may have something to write on Eternal Sunshine of Spotless Mind. It is long pending.
cool dude.. mazha aa gaya padhke... waise vodka ke nashe main jyada samz main nahi aaya but u know it is the state of mind when u get all emotions behind the line...
@Spoiled God --> Thanks. But aap hain kaun?
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