Voices Within
Decked in the white bridals
An epitome of their ideals
A smile of self righteousness
All she lost was Self
Some clouds were set on the mind
Happiness was written on them
And there was a sun beyond
The heat of which she never saw
Thinking is an unforgiveable sin
Its all written to follow
No matter what is you feel within
The paths are set by sounds so hollow
Judgement day is the day
When the great ones ask
What my child is your greatest sin?
I did not hear those voices within.
Decked in the white bridals
An epitome of their ideals
A smile of self righteousness
All she lost was Self
Some clouds were set on the mind
Happiness was written on them
And there was a sun beyond
The heat of which she never saw
Thinking is an unforgiveable sin
Its all written to follow
No matter what is you feel within
The paths are set by sounds so hollow
Judgement day is the day
When the great ones ask
What my child is your greatest sin?
I did not hear those voices within.
1 comment:
Good Stuff, I do see a good composition and good imagination too.But somewhere the verse has a very indifferent feel to it.We don't get an insight of the bride's mind nither of the author.
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